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Old 11-15-04, 06:31 PM   #11
Parallel
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Voted For: *Troop*

E Looch...:
put asteriks on ya name only way u be no.1 rv
see my name an u consumed in greed an ^ look wit no period is what u be
^^meh 4/10...not very good weak rhyming

small font fits u all ya lines aint really noticed or read
tryna shine off ya lyrics should just let ya s curl grease do it instead
^^6.3/10...not bad good vocabulary...not bad punch

reasearch another disease shit wont work this week E endin ya streak
unoriginal every hour theres 3600 of u and u calim a.i.'s elite?
5/10...not very good weak punch...not bad flow

just try kidnapins its gonna be the only way u ever ran-som people
could own u bilingual puta...
...but slaverys illegal an yet still nobodys around u tryna mingle*
3/10...bad rhyme didnt even rhyme nothing great..

life pass before your eyes when ya electricity blacks out
never a ridah just a hitchhika in a bus stop only time u in a glass house*
6/10...didnt realy rhyme but good punch..but not a rhyme..

Troop:
Hault to all Cornish Ambitions Testify to your Truths Please Mr E Looch
Ya "Financial Income" comes From Vaginal Devouring it should be E Mooch
7/10...good punch

Technique never Duplicated,Cus Pussified Thread Duckers isnt in Preference
Strobe Pm'd me with Rv's Best of All time Vets And Looch wasent in Reference
6/10...good vocabulary and not bad punch

Your Dna Cells Recognize your Falseness why is your BloodPressure187
Ya Perpetrateing Respected Veteran U look up 2 me like Ten Viewin Eleven
6/10...good multis...and vocabulary and punch
You Never Developed your Cash Collecting Tactics so your still on the Grind
Looch is never Heard Like Mimes No wonder hes a "Legend in his Own Mind"
7/10...pretty dope punch...

One last Reminder stop with your Recycled Lyrics they are well Past Expirement
This Records as your 3rd Loss so Finally now you can go into Retirement
8/10...very good vocabulary...


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