i agree on the accent thing, it actually helps instead of being a hindrance. shit, you should pass along your tips to the british cats who try to be emcees. and your voice is strong with a good cadence to it.

this beat is pretty tight. i could do without the cheesy snare roll, but the melodies and bells work nicely here.

that break coulda used some sample work or something...

overall, your mixing is not as bad as you make it out to be. sounded definitely passable to me. go to google and search for "capheine's vocal editing process." that page has a bunch of really good mixing tips that will improve your quality dramatically. i heard minimal static, but sounds like you bumped the red on the monitor a few times.

all in all i was feeling this. keep up the good shit, dude.