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Old 11-15-04, 09:38 PM   #11
streetryda
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aight fi-del got my vote on this battle....

cross-your structure woulda been screwed if ya didnt put all those periods in it.....and okay you had decent punches..verse was kinda basic but to the point which was good....no real vocab.....lines were short.....and your last 2 lines didnt rhyme at the end....your opener bar had some humer whuch was nice to see.but i think u coulda came a lil harder than u did.....
6/10

fi-aight u won cuz you came with harder punches..structure was off tho....but you had some humer in ur punches as well....good vocab i liked the audiciously word very creative.....came with more punches and multis than cross.....basically you came harder and better vocab and punches keep it real fam.....
8/10

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