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Old 11-16-04, 12:28 AM   #4
~Lady Fiya~
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Voted For: Katastrophikal

u had a lot of multis, but sum were kinda pointless.. however u had sum nice personals from his name at the beginning.. some of ur lines were not punches which shoulda been omitted.. but u had the better flow, but ur structure was kinda all over the place.. king-dipset ur verse wasn't bad but the Osama line's played, u didn't come real hard in this so i didn't give u the vote.. so there it is..
my vote/ Katastrophe
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