Thread: The Break Up
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Old 11-16-04, 02:10 AM   #5
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You know, i've read all of your drops Ice Pick, but i must say, this was the most raw, full of emotions, and just dripping with every type of feeling, your words set the tone well here, and i liked the way you set this up, kind of like your love was rain drops, and they were falling away....thats how you wrote this...well, what i took from it...but so intense man, i always enjoy reading your pieces,and in time,your broken heart will mend........1
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