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Old 11-16-04, 02:14 AM   #14
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Voted For: Premanition



Come On Is A Premonition Really Necessary For This Occasion?
You Wanna Battle? You'll Lose I'm Like A Mathamatical Equation
2/10 self glorification
Look Out It's An Invasion P.I.N.K Running Threw Ya Whole Crew
One By One Get Slaughtered Starting Off With Little Old You
2/10
Mind Above Body? Hmm A Minority Statement According To You
Cant Spell Premonition RIght ,What A Clown ,Your A Fool
2/10
As A Matter Of Fact Kid,You As Worthless As Hang-Ho
"Pre"Writing Like Getting "Pre Tickets" At Fan-Dang-O
1/10....The hell is that
Your Eternal Infected With Tha Sick Rhymes Im Throwing
Forever Elivating And Like A RIver Over-Flowing
1/10..No
Im Abusive With Explicit Lyrics Watch Where You "Stand"
For I Leave You "Paralized" Better Yet End Your Entire Life Spand
3/10
Stand Amongst Me Solitude And I'll Leave You WithOut A Jaw
Remove Your Tounge You Cant Spit And Drop You Back Like A Ball
1/10....Doesnt rhyme
I'm An Aggresive Mind On Tha Mic That's YOUR Premonition
Left You Eternaly Damaged It's About Time You Call Your Phisician
5/10
My Mission Wasnt Hard Bring You To Tha Front Line And I Succeeded
Ya Verse Was Pointless Was Never Even Needed
2/10

ya punches were simple
ya wordplay was ok
ya similies were ok
ya personals werent there
overall u had jus not a very good drop


Askin rhetorical questions, “whos nxt?”, won’t want the answer…
Cos ya skill like ya girl’s chest, need something to enhance~ya…(*)
4/10
This kid got a bunch of multis but punches got played concepts…
I’d say im shaggin ya girlfriend, but damn that claims nonsense…
4/10
‘Epic’, ~‘Thriller’ in this thread wen I merk this ‘paedophile’…(**)
Dawg ur 18 with a girl looking spotty, immature and juvernile…
3/10....Pedophile
Fuck confident, u’d put ur house on me if u were a bettin~man…
Cos u know like I know, 4 all ur wins u’ve neva faced a veteran…
4/10

ya punches were hittin
ya wordplay was real good
ya structure was ok
ya similies were good
ya personals were there

u had everthing ya comp didnt
prem winz hands down

P.I.N.K on the straight n narrow…lol….wiv ya leaders name…(***)
Thinking u ‘jesus’…’cross’ wiv me n u bout to ‘bleed to fame’…
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