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IP:
Voted For: JPoll
Egotistically you can't beat me, cuz I never miss aim/ Statistically the king of this game, and I'm here to reclaim/
2/10
The ballistical championship, leaving Jpoll with no votes/
And a sedistical slit throat, using a verse that he already wrote/
2/10
Your not rhythmical, you can't win, I'm on a higher level/
It's mystical, your six feet beneath, and i'm the one with the shovel/
1/10
Probably mythically aged, and yet you aint even hit puberty/
Ritually waiting till u get married cuz "I have to keep my purity"/
3/10
That's what J says, yet he keeps a spare bottle beside the bed/
Only a fag jacksoff with thoughts of a man inside his head/
1/10
punches were lame and played
wordplay was non existent
ya similies werent there
no metas
and no personals
kinda like a regular freestyle
Another hurb child, kids claiming to be a whole coast...
Too bad I'm like Rocky, punching his frozen raw roast...
3/10
And its true and it's on, even with a quick key,
You can't think you'll win...
......................cause not even your family believes
2/10
You'll get owned, if you go toe to toe with the champ...
I mean fuck as his desktop he's ink...
.....................ready to be hit with the NOBODY stamp...
5/10
You got cramps yet, cause your meager streak is done...
This kids as stupid as nelly claiming to be number one..
4/10
No I'm the king, I've had belts and I'll show you my ring..
You with my win is as unlikely,
...........as you and Marilyn Monroe having an all night fling
3/10
punches were kinda simple and plain
ya wordplay was slightly better
i didnt like ya structure
ya metas were ok i guess
ya personals were better than ya opponents
Poll gets this 4 overall better wordplay and punches
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