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Voted For: Premanition
Premanition
Askin rhetorical questions, “whos nxt?”, won’t want the answer…
Cos ya skill like ya girl’s chest, need something to enhance~ya…(*)
/\ i thought nice opener good punch
This kid got a bunch of multis but punches got played concepts…
I’d say im shaggin ya girlfriend, but damn that claims nonsense…
/\ ok line ok punch flowed aight
‘Epic’, ~‘Thriller’ in this thread wen I merk this ‘paedophile’…(**)
Dawg ur 18 with a girl looking spotty, immature and juvernile…
/\ lol nice Mike Jack punch in the 1st line
Fuck confident, u’d put ur house on me if u were a bettin~man…
Cos u know like I know, 4 all ur wins u’ve neva faced a veteran…
/\ an aight punch coulda been better though
P.I.N.K on the straight n narrow…lol….wiv ya leaders name…(***)
Thinking u ‘jesus’…’cross’ wiv me n u bout to ‘bleed to fame’…
/\ nice closer diss was good nice wordplay
Epic
Come On Is A Premonition Really Necessary For This Occasion?
You Wanna Battle? You'll Lose I'm Like A Mathamatical Equation
/\ opener didn't connect
Look Out It's An Invasion P.I.N.K Running Threw Ya Whole Crew
One By One Get Slaughtered Starting Off With Little Old You
/\ not a strong punch at all more filler
Mind Above Body? Hmm A Minority Statement According To You
Cant Spell Premonition RIght ,What A Clown ,Your A Fool
/\ nice punch and usin his name to good effect
As A Matter Of Fact Kid,You As Worthless As Hang-Ho
"Pre"Writing Like Getting "Pre Tickets" At Fan-Dang-O
/\ ??? blah to that bar
Your Eternal Infected With Tha Sick Rhymes Im Throwing
Forever Elivating And Like A RIver Over-Flowing
/\ filler
Im Abusive With Explicit Lyrics Watch Where You "Stand"
For I Leave You "Paralized" Better Yet End Your Entire Life Spand
Self-Glory...blah
Stand Amongst Me Solitude And I'll Leave You WithOut A Jaw
Remove Your Tounge You Cant Spit And Drop You Back Like A Ball
/\ 2nd line aight but again 1st line a self-g line...avoid them
I'm An Aggresive Mind On Tha Mic That's YOUR Premonition
Left You Eternaly Damaged It's About Time You Call Your Phisician
/\ nice rhyme but again self-g in the 1st line
My Mission Wasnt Hard Bring You To Tha Front Line And I Succeeded
Ya Verse Was Pointless Was Never Even Needed
/\ 1st line self-g 2nd line....a lot of closers are ending like that lately...starting to get played now
Ima go wit Prem because his verse was better overall...this wasn't the best i've ever seen and to be honest both probably could've come a lot harder but Prem was better on this occasion wit the punches both had decent structure and flow and the rhymes were coo...but Epic try and avoid Self-Glory lines they damage ur verse because it's wasting lines because it's a battle not a self-glory match...but better luck next time...and an ok battle but v/Premanition...RTF on the link in my sig (The Song Now Playing)
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