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Old 11-16-04, 10:42 AM   #7
Jay-SmileZ
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Voted For: intensify effect

Won by mile...punches, word play was otrocious on intesity...

"blow ya brain to the ceiling so u can Think-Above-Me..."


"so i'll end ya befor u get "2 carryed away" like "Twins-On-A-Stretcher"...."


"cuz honestly U Can't Fuck With Me... like ya girl during her Men-U-Struls.... *menstrual=period*"

These rymes aren't for a guy whos 28 an 27...i see people who have way better records an dont rymes half as good...there must be some serious dick riding going on or you just elevated....

All lines hit hard

No Mercy:::i didnt understand ya lines...you had some personals but they were too basic...

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