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L.E
From: Edmonton, Alberta, Canada |
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Voted For: oreo
A'ight...a decent battle. Bizzy...you NEED to change your structure. It is hard to read, and it doesn't flow that great...punches were okay, but the verse was structured so badly that it wasn't even really enjoyable to read...Oreo came with some nice punches and he actually had a structure to his verse. Flow was good, rhyme scheme could be a little better.
Vote- Oreo
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