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Old 11-16-04, 03:31 PM   #21
E Looch
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Voted For: sabotage

not to good of a battle honestly

konvex- your structure is good but seemed to be to much of your focal point everything lacked to me punchs and personals didnt hit very hard some didnt even really connect to me your wordplay was there in some parts it was decent when u spit it fuck what else um it was all basic even with bold words nothin really stood out to me <<< tight punch an this is just feedback lol just keep workin with wordplay and better punchs to connect

sabotage-decent verse overall played opener and pretty weak closer i thought your flow was good i thought the seperation of your bars is wierd though just a pretty basic verse though not much really stood out here either work on some more wordplay like u had with the vicks line

i think sabotage edged this out
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