Voted For: *Troop*

Inception:
Word... first few bars were FIRE! ... but from there it kept goin down and down. The hot bars were self glorification and the wack ones were punches.. so like.. that fucked you up a bit..

structure was WAY OFF.. flow was on point though.. multis helped it a fair bit..

Things that annoyed me about you:
stop spelling shit with a "z" its pretty gay..

stop using speech marks when theres no wordplay...
and if youre gonna hyphen your multis, HYPHEN ALL OF EM..

also, try using a smaller font.. i think thatll help ya structure heaps..

troop:
word... nicely structured (except for the second last line... but that was an honest mistake)... The thing that put you above your opponent was your punches.. every bar punched.. you had nice similies in there, very creative. flow was on point the whole time..

incept did a few things better, but troop had the ALL ROUND better verse...

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