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Better than you..
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im not feelin this. it was too basic. u need to plan ya verses better and put more thought into them. work on ya structure and vocab. i see u were trying to rhyme, well u accomplished that but as far as quality goes this was poor. no hate.
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred…
Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug…
Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby…
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