You Improved.

You went from very shit to just shit...

OK... flow was hella choppy... like.. you stopped and started a lot.. voice had no confidence or emotion... Quality was ass.. some punches made me laugh... not laugh because they were funny, but because they were wack.. i think it was that "boob, noob, boob-tube" one, or something... hahaha.. anyway.. yeah..

keep elevating.. Use "noise reduction" and "Hiss Reduction" to improve your quality... also it might be smart to do a little dynamics processing to level out the waves..

Work on emotion.. and try to flow better.. (not choppy)

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