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Old 11-17-04, 12:08 PM   #19
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Voted For: Eyvon

eyvon got this hands down, yo.....she murked you dawg...some of those lines didnt even rhyme....she simply came harder throughout....

my advice:
eyvon....yo punches is good, you just need to up ya creativety and think out tha box....also, some of yo lines were a bit stretched, you can add multis to help that...keep it up yo...

thuglife....you need to up ya whole game. you gonna get murked a lot droppin lyke that. you got tha vocab, and thats really all you got...keep battling and reading battles of tha better people....

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