New to RB
From: Within my abstraction |
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IP:
"Condoms for minds because I’m fuking your brain
Fucking insane"<----------Dope line
"Your time ends now I stole your future
People fuking you from all angles like Kama Sutra"<------HAHA dope
"Release them freely like trapped caged birds"<----- trapped and caged generally mean the same thing, that kinda fucked your flow up......
the second verse was aight diff. from the first........i liked it overall it was a good piece with some good witt and some seriously graphic lines.....keep that up peace!
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