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Old 11-17-04, 12:27 PM   #6
Hangar1ne
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Posts: 32
From: Within my abstraction
IP:

"Condoms for minds because I’m fuking your brain
Fucking insane"<----------Dope line

"Your time ends now I stole your future
People fuking you from all angles like Kama Sutra"<------HAHA dope

"Release them freely like trapped caged birds"<----- trapped and caged generally mean the same thing, that kinda fucked your flow up......

the second verse was aight diff. from the first........i liked it overall it was a good piece with some good witt and some seriously graphic lines.....keep that up peace!
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