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Old 11-17-04, 01:53 PM   #23
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Voted For: E Looch

*Troop*

Hault to all Cornish Ambitions Testify to your Truths Please Mr E Looch
Ya "Financial Income" comes From Vaginal Devouring it should be E Mooch
nice opener
Technique never Duplicated,Cus Pussified Thread Duckers isnt in Preference
Strobe Pm'd me with Rv's Best of All time Vets And Looch wasent in Reference
lol...decent punch i guess 7.5/10
Your Dna Cells Recognize your Falseness why is your BloodPressure187
Ya Perpetrateing Respected Veteran U look up 2 me like Ten Viewin Eleven
decent meta...nice 7.5/10
You Never Developed your Cash Collecting Tactics so your still on the Grind
Looch is never Heard Like Mimes No wonder hes a "Legend in his Own Mind"
best bar...nice personal..8.5/10
One last Reminder stop with your Recycled Lyrics they are well Past Expirement
This Records as your 3rd Loss so Finally now you can go into Retirement
nah..wasn't a good closer...6.5/10

u had some decent punches...nothing great. but decent. maybe u should of swapped some bars coz the opener was weak. no great punches. had some nice metas. actually most of the verse was meta? overall an average verse.

E Looch

put asteriks on ya name only way u be no.1 rv
see my name an u consumed in greed an ^ look wit no period is what u be
could of bin better worded but this was a creative punch.8.5/10
small font fits u all ya lines aint really noticed or read
tryna shine off ya lyrics should just let ya s curl grease do it instead
not feelin it...6.5/10
reasearch another disease shit wont work this week E endin ya streak
unoriginal every hour theres 3600 of u and u calim a.i.'s elite?
lol...nice, i got it. 9/10
just try kidnapins its gonna be the only way u ever ran-som people
could own u bilingual puta...
...but slaverys illegal an yet still nobodys around u tryna mingle*
structure is blah but woah...that was witty. 9/10
life pass before your eyes when ya electricity blacks out
never a ridah just a hitchhika in a bus stop only time u in a glass house*
real nice setup...but i excpected more from the punch..hmm 7.5/10

locch had a real nice consistant verse with a few nice personal....and dope metas. Troop had decent punches but most of it was similies...

v/ E Looch