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Old 11-17-04, 04:58 PM   #38
DrasticMeasureZ
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Voted For: surgical

From the beginning you see this battle was mine
Cause u basic cable and im on showtime
I steal your life like cars on Grand Theft Auto
Take your breath and make it hard for you to swallow
^^^^^^^^^^ ALL FLOW NO GOOD PUNCHES

I'll have your body like the leaves in autum its falling
You talk shit in the restroom but now your stalling
Tired of your rap shit and your little terms
Lysol need to spray your spit cause it filled with germs
^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIIIIGHT NICE PUNCH AND FLOW


An when my punches hit its heavy like a rock hit u
The devil inside of me will make jesus walk with you
You need advice so u go to Staples to find out why your mouth is stuck
They cant seem to understand you u like the Aflac duck
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ PUNCH DONT STRETCH YA LINES THAT MUCH

U got to tommorow morning 2 spit shit
Knowin all u gonna to do is copy, paste, and edit
^^^^^^^^^^^ TRUE~! GOOD PUNCH




SURGICAL- U HAD "OK" PUNCHES BUT THEY WERE CREATIVE AND THOUGHTFUL AND YA FLOW NEEDS A LIL WORK, DONT STRETCH YA LINES THAT MUCH






i spit venomus fluid/
bitch you cant step to me so dont do it/
^^^^^^^^^^ EH FLOW MESSED UP NOT AN GOOD PUNCH



ill unload bullets into your chest if you fuck with me/
then lil nigga it will be time for your surgery/
^^^^^^^^^^^^ WACK NOT AN GOOD PUNCH



this fucking battle is high stakes like you and Michael Jacksons sex tapes/
Remember that evey doctor and rapper makes mistakes/

This man mad cause my rhymes are dope/
lil bitch aint even got enough post to vote/

this niggas mother is my number one fan/
bitch should decline this battle while he still can/

^^^^^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD PUNCHES NOR FLOW


RELOADED- U NEED TO ELEVATE ON PUNCHES AND FLOW MAYNE AND USIGN PERSONALS


OVERALL= SURGICAL GOT DIS HANDS DOWN BECAUSE HE HAD PUNCHES AND FLOW

RELOADED- WORK ON PUNCHES AND YA FLOW PLUS YA STRUTURE MAYNE
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THE SLEEP & THE DREAM-
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Originally Posted by Wreckage
Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

P.S.A

COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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