mess with me get cooked
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IP:
Voted For: warrior
battlein me herbs-get-scared ill rip ya words-apart/
dis lame needs to fix his name......and change "murk"-to-"garb"/(garbage)
^^^^^^^^^^^ O AIGHT NICE WORDPLAY GOOD PUNCH
murkage-is-a-homo im hurtin-kids-wit-no-hope/
u prolly had a betta chance of winnin if u no-showed/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ OK PUNCH DONT STRETCH CHA LINES THAT MUCH
see now im talkin crazy cause frankly u had no chance-at-all/
cause i could smell "defeat" in the air like u standin on ya hands-to-walk/
^^^^^^^^^^^^ ALRIGHT GOOD PUNCH CREATIVITY THERE
dis mans-all-talk and if he said somtin hot i prolly said-it-before/
dis battles ova cause "age" aint meet the requirements to be ready-for-"war"/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIGHT NICE CLOSA GOOD PUNCH
WARRIOR- U HAD AN GOOD VERSE NICE PUNCHES WORDPLAYS AND WORK ON YA FLOW MAYNE
fags like you get shitted on by the Supreme Ballers
Ima Playa hata got more head than abes face on $20 dollars
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ EH DOESNT MAKE SENSE
Yo warrior wil get Shell shocked-Aim locked-Gonna get his Dome rocked
soon as you step out side-you hear me fully fledged shotgun get cocked
^^^^^^^^^^^ TOO BASIC AND PLAYED
Lyrically beat ya wit any instrument available-includin my shoe-
Bitch no one could smell ya flows even if u brought the canines thru
^^^^^^^^^^^^ PUNCH 'OK' FLOW
your finnished-your done with uve been lyrikly injected with flu
this is just a taste of me-no wonder yo mam rejected you***
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ EH NOT AN GOOD CLOSA
MURKAGE- "OK" YA VERSE WAS TOO BASIC NOT AN GOOD PUNCHES "OK" FLOW BUT CHA PUNCHES KINDA LACKED AND BAISC
OVERALL= WARRIOR GETS MY VOTE CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW
WARRIOR- HAD PUNCHES AND FLOW DA PUNCHES JUST EDGE DA BATTLE TO GET MY VOTE PLUS DA WORDPLAY
MURKAGE- YA VERSE KINDA LACKED NOT AN GOOD ONE WORK ON CREATING MORE PUNCHES MAKE DEM HARDER USE PERSONALS AND WORDPLAY
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Originally Posted by Wreckage
Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.
Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.
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