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Old 11-17-04, 05:43 PM   #9
Terse.
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A1C, u had a meh verse overall...ya shit can definitely use some improvement though...try n come wit more fresh/creative concepts next time...Outsider, i dunno what to say.....ya verse was wack yo...u focused on multis and vocab...<--n i know both of those are good, but the overall strength of a battle verse comes from punchlines and strong/witty wordplay...u had neither....

V/ A1C...