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Old 11-18-04, 09:44 AM   #2
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Black Poet
 
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From: London
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Voted For: ..:Outbreak:..

Ohhhh Shit thought I would peep this verse, dame
sinner your verse was well basic with played lines.
you did have some ok word play at times but some
lines like....

he thinks his rhymes are uneque he can't even speak
went out wid a dog for a week and she just got freaked
^^^Poor as hell^^^

Best bar was the close.

Out.. Come nice and won this battle on his frist bar basiclly

This Just another Oppurtunity For Sinner to Be Owned and Clowned-
Thought Xclusive was King of herb's, Obviously he was Overthrown and S was Crowned-
^^^Nice opener with a hard hitting punch.

Out had decent vocab, wordplay and flow and was
relentless with the punches...

Vote .:Out:.