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Old 11-18-04, 05:16 PM   #8
Terse.
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Voted For: - ! : Flawless : ! -

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Flawless, ya verse was aight...you're gonna need to work on the punches tho, make 'em more creative next time...the 'ass on fire' line is played yo...anyways, u had decent consistency, which was a plus........Devil, ya shit was way too basic...u definitely need ta' up yourself creativity-wise wit punches n shit...no hate, just some honest feedback...both yall stay up

V/ Flawless, for more creativity...

i need an honest vote here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=157669