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Voted For: Tstorm
vote: tstorm....
REloaded this is how it is....
1) do not type ya verse like this...
im gonna kill ya blood spill-ya
if i tossed ya finger at ya buddy, still no-one feel's-ya /
^^ that look NOOBISH N weak N stupid dont skip a line just cuz u made a bar keep it going like tstome did peep hes verse he droped N u'rs the way it looks tstorm looks better so-far befor i even looked at what ya actully wrote....
2) get more creative N more detail punches...
your not a storm your just a breeze/
im bout to win this battle with ease/ (-- thats ya first bar N there was no personal no punch just slef-glorifying ya-self which is weak in a battle.....
wtf?..dumb herb setting this battle up before i even agreed?
well...with a 3-8 record,thats the only time uve taken a lead!
there was a nice personal there N punch thats how u start off a battle N continue to do so thru out the verse...
if u add multis ya verse would be a better read or if u got creative punches that would help also...
basicly think out the box N think of some out-rages shit u feel me...
all around tstome verse was a better read better punches better flow N all... 8.0
reloaded u need to elevate still try some open mic first N drop something RAW as if u was coming at someone sometime that can help u think outside the box........
im just trying to help u out reloaded insted of just say stomr won thats it...
keep them coming u will get better....
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