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sdizzle:
when its time to show his skills, stephens never owned it
fuck, the only reason your in this match is cuz i didn't have an opponent
lol. good opener.
kids heads gassed beyond belief, his face is bout to burst
he cant win on rapbattles... why do you think hes on rapverse?
another good one.
kids not liked by anyone, so what he talkin bout his rep
hes got a 8-step plan for victory..
............................... but im just gonna skip past step
okay, nice. wording was sketchy.
and i dont even understan dhis lines, to me its all ramble
then when opportunity knocks steph breaks the door handle
structure off, punch hit thought. good.
just take ur loss like a man & quit ur bitching
ima leave wood in a termite-able condition
again, last line a lil short on flow. but nice punch.
ya have great punches, some personals connected. structure was weak on some ends but the wordplay was good, could have squeezed a multi somewhere in there. overall good. 7.8/10
stephen eldwood:
Delete your account of RB, Or maybe just quit rappin son,
Cause you shot up on RV... other boards hes been dead for months,
bad wording, word j-j-jumbly.[b]
Fat shit, Im above, you cant get higher than me,
You put shadows on the sun........
.....And hes never heard of Brother Ali,
[b]um no.
Wannabe rapper, This bitch will never get full grown,
The crowds like rip sdizzle!..... Then puts it on his tombstone,
eh. ill give ya effort points.
My punches hit hard, Plus idiot.. Man its stickin to you,
Asked him to make sense.. He pulled out the scissors and glue,
ironically, this line didnt make sense.
Case man you try to be funny, But really just a pain in the ass,
So i throw you in the garbage bin...
....Is when ur a barrel of laughs..
got the punch, not bad. needed wordplay.
ya punches werent connecting, the analogy must have been from alabama, and the similies/ metaphors from texas. idk. lol. but ya didnt win, nice try though.
vote: sdizzle
congrats.
return the favor sometime.
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quote your own damn lyrics...
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