yo emceenutcracker, you have to work with your rhymes and lyrics, most of your punches are weak HINT - try to use bigger and more complex words in your lyrics, also dont make them short, like dont write 3 or 4 words in one line write as much as you can.

also your rhyme patterns are off track, first your rappin about one thing, and then another thing, and one line has like 10 words and another one has 3. try to keep your lines even and on track.

and one other thing, dont call voters cock sucking bitches, how the fuck do you expect to get a vote like that? if you lose accept your lse and dont bitch about it no matter what people say.

keep practicin.
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my vote - atheist