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Old 11-18-04, 10:21 PM   #9
Plutonium
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Kwell:
Dude names himself after Vincent, for art he ditches his cause
he illustrates dogs...jus so he can say he's ever had a bitch in his draws
^^^lmao, nice opener
pitiful...and if ya wackness dont leave u down, i'll leave u truly saddened
i'ma bury ya face in the gutter bitch, jus to curb your enthusiasm
^^^didn't jump out at me...decent punch
i notice that u aint smart at all, when i come thru and strike skulls
it's funny how jokes go over ya head, but never the light bulb
^^^aight punch
i try and merk this hoe quick, but he runs till his lungs are aching
that's why takin Vango dead serious....is such a huge undertaking
^^^played
i should even try on this dude...no need for ferocious lines or a tight form
cuz he blows,
...........and by doin that, he thinks he can take the world by storm
^^^lines too stretched, decent
Vango ya scriptures are weak, too easy for my verse ta' shake, clown
and wit lines so fragile.....u leave voters wit nervous break downs
^^^first line too stretched, aight closer

overall a aight verse, you got potential kid 7/10

I'll start with your Proper Kwallifications, kid you don't even own a rap degree
I got freestyle raps that'll make your lungs collapse like you were O.D.B
^^^little stretched for a opener...self glorifying
I peeped some of your battles Kwell, half your shit don't even rhyme
Your sig says "Dopeness speaks for itself", I guess that your a mime
^^^ha, nice
Your like Roy Jones in a heavyweight match, underweight and outclassed
How can you be in "Mind above Body", when your heads stuck in your ass
^^^lmao, nice punch on the crew
Is it Kwell or Kwali, I've since your battles so I know it aint Mos Def
This kid wouldn't be dope even if I changed your name to Crystal Meth
^^^aight punch here, good nameplay on first line
All your punches are catchin air Kwell while Vango is checking chins
You could create 7 aliases, vote for yourself, and still not even win
^^^good punch here
Changed the name of this league so much that it's got confusing
Oh now I get why they changed the name, it's cuz Kwell Loves Losing
^^^best bar of the match

overall a nice verse 8/10

this was a close battle, Vango edged kwell in this by a bit in this, with nice personals, and that closer was ill...both verses flows fine, both verses structures are decent, vango took this for harder hitting punches, and better vocab

voted for: Vango
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