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Old 11-19-04, 12:48 AM   #23
Know-Gimix
The Ups and Downs of Life
 
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Voted For: enygma

Both verses were good... heres my breakdown....

U thinking ur a 'step' a'head' is funny, u a joke, i stomp on skulls for a living
None of ya punches r hitting, u blaze a page...readin ma verse 'n' skimming
kinda weak bar, flow is o.k kinda stretched but the punch is weak.
I be the reaper, watch as u try and inhale words of fury, take a breather
I'll take out ya speaker, To light up ya life, take rv 'n' spark up the heater
decent flow again, but the punch no good.
You bin here for awhile, but u aint even a vet, more like you were new
In this battle, you should already be dead, like the inactivity of ya crew
best bar so far, decent punch-
Honestly, this isn't tha life to suitya, take up trombone n get a tutor
Kids perverted, he think that playin wit big guns is playtime at hooters
lol this was pretty funny... your punches all in all aren't stellar but this was funny to me.
Think u a star?, I'm godly wit infinite forms of rap, so u overlooking clouds
Don't shout ur verse isn't a big deal, Like tryna find a birthday party clown
this was ????... the punch is really out-there kikko, This might have been nice if it was worded different.

This cat's easily trash........enough to overflow a land fill
But Verb keeps words in motion....while his verse is still a stand still
funny little punch, decent opener.
This cat bringing fire?.....Well I guess he's got sterno
Kid, I'll knock your fucking lights out and have you going nocturnal
again decent punch with the wordplay there... flow is better than opponents so far...
I'm probably the oldest on this site... ya still need to have protection
Cause I'll shove my cane up your ass and give you a staff infection
lol... took a second of thought, or i must be tired... decent bar again.
I'm miles ahead.....how dare you try to come spit em with me
I mean shit......he writes in small text cause he's got little to see
this was o.k... not as good as the previous bars but still decent.
It's over, nighty night.....guess it's time to check out ya whore
Can't beat me straight up.....so he tried to make it best out of four
closer was kinda eh... i dunno the history between you two but not as impressive as i'd expect.... all in all I think Enygma was a little more consistent with his drop, but decent job from both... keep droppin kids... return with some honesty.... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1741858
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