I thought this was a little better than I used to hear from Kontro.....flow wise. I didn't think it was that bad, but could definately still used some help. Sounded like you sdded a little accent to your voice a little in your intro. Lyrics were a little simple. Flow was cool.....didn't hear too much rushing like Seven was talking about. A few dubs were off. Echo was getting a little annoying. You also could have stopped the beat when the song was over.....maybe faded it out a little. I don't really like the slow beats and slow rapping style that much so I wasn't feeling it as much as some others might, but it wasn't that bad......keep droppin