WOW!!!......drop the volume on your vocals. Why are you whispering into the mic? Sounded like a freestyle. Flow was ok at best.....kinda didn't know where you were going at parts. Lyrics could have used a little help, but like I said, sounded like a freestyle. I think you need to sit down and write a song/verse and then spit it. Once you have all that done, come see me in the audio assistance forum and I'll help you out with cool edit

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