iight.. beat is ehhh...

First verse... got presence for sure... overdubs sound to loud.. muffle shit.. Lyrics could be better... not bad flow was pretty good tho

Second Verse... need to raise the vocals.. its hard to make out what you sayin... Voice is coo.... Needs a bit more emotion to really mesh with this beat. but it sounds solid..

Keep droppin

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=160798

Hit that when u can. Pz.