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Old 11-19-04, 06:13 AM   #18
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Voted For: Verbal Phenom

..Kontroverzey..

"phenom"inall Tactics Lead To Misery, When Your Facin the Kid....
'Cause The only Time you spittin solid is when Reading my sig.....
/\ 1st line aight 2nd line self-glory

And Dawg, I dont even care How Many Bars You spit....
'Cause One of mine equal up to 1000 of that bullshit.....
/\ again slight self-glory in this bar especially 2nd line again

Spittin Punchelines that'll make you enheirit your wealth....
I was wonderin why he didnt want to tryout for SM,
.....'Cause he didn't want to Emberass his-self...
/\ this was an aight punch/personal however the 3 line rhyme to me hides a stretched structure

Hide Behind the net all you want, We all Know your bitch....
You couldn't produce enuff power to light up a room,
.......even if you turned on the switch....
/\ an aight punch flowed aight but a lil stretched again

DUde set this battle up without my Concent..Now im merkin any prospect...
Im handin It to you, Like Grade A Science projects...
/\ closer coulda been better slight punch but again a lil self-glory

Cosmos aka Verbal Phenom

honest ur a joke...i only wish i'd thought twice...before i clicked accept
look at this net thug...u think u RIGHT, good coz after they'll be nothin LEFT
/\ nice opener good punch

i don't take kindly to wannab thugs, so im using you as a jock strap
i spray venom on ya "paper", look an take notice that you soft "w"rap
/\ self-gory in that bar[/]b

u smart? nah mines a superior mind,spittin straight line like a parallelogram
S.uperior M.ethods are often known to s.uck m.eat, so i'll buy u a leg of lamb
[b]/\ 1st line self-g but 2nd line was a decent punch i liked


i knew that u wern't a born leader...A.O.D fell through pretty quick
i don't normally hit gurls, but u an E-gangsta, so u'll get a full "clip"*
/\ lol at this bar nice punch/personal

i spit deep n from the soul, so i spit lines that'll cause u a heart attack
jus look at ya name, even the debres of letters are tryna escape ya wack
/\ 1st line self-glory 2nd line was a good line for the closer

Damn this was a very self-glorified battle which really in battles don't stand for much really...i think both need to avoid using them...Kontro we cool and all but i really don't think you snatched this battle Verb got ya on flow and structure ya need to lose the 3 line bars this is the 2nd battle where i expected heat and got luke warm instead...both are elevated but on this occasion...Verb Phenom u were lucky to escape wit my vote due to more successful punches and better wordplay and personals...

V/Cosmos...RTF on ma sig vs 3rd-Shift or in my song doesn't matter
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