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Voted For: JPoll
Eastcoast
Egotistically you can't beat me, cuz I never miss aim/
Statistically the king of this game, and I'm here to reclaim/
/\ Blah self-glory
The ballistical championship, leaving Jpoll with no votes/
And a sedistical slit throat, using a verse that he already wrote/
/\ weak self-g and played
Your not rhythmical, you can't win, I'm on a higher level/
It's mystical, your six feet beneath, and i'm the one with the shovel/
/\ punch meh...again self-g
Probably mythically aged, and yet you aint even hit puberty/
Ritually waiting till u get married cuz "I have to keep my purity"/
/\ aight line but not special
That's what J says, yet he keeps a spare bottle beside the bed/
Only a fag jacksoff with thoughts of a man inside his head/
/\ ??? blah at the closer
JPoll
Another hurb child, kids claiming to be a whole coast...
Too bad I'm like Rocky, punching his frozen raw roast...
/\ 2nd line self-g but aight opener
And its true and it's on, even with a quick key,
You can't think you'll win...
......................cause not even your family believes
/\ blah at 3 line rhymes but good punch
You'll get owned, if you go toe to toe with the champ...
I mean fuck as his desktop he's ink...
.....................ready to be hit with the NOBODY stamp...
/\ good punch liked it
You got cramps yet, cause your meager streak is done...
This kids as stupid as nelly claiming to be number one..
/\ aight punch again
No I'm the king, I've had belts and I'll show you my ring..
You with my win is as unlikely,
...........as you and Marilyn Monroe having an all night fling
/\ aight closer coulda been better though
V/JPoll...1st off explaining isn't nesseccary...but i will Eastcoast how much more self-g could ya get???...ur supposed to be dissin ya opponent strucutre was stretched and flow off in places also lose the / thing it's newb...punches non-existent and personals none...no real wordplay basic vocab...elevate
JPoll...much better verse 1 sided to be honest u took this with ease and you shoulda took the time to battle someone with more skill to be honest...this to me looks like a newb bashing but blah flowed aight but try and lose the 3 line rhymes because it to me jus hides a stretched structure...
RTF on ma sig or on my latest song...
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Originally Posted by High Dro
furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born
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^ Amen Brother ^
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Originally Posted by ∆ P E X X
i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.
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R.I.P OMB
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