I love this beat... bout did a track over this shit myself
You have a presence on the mic... But you do rush lines here and there like u put to many words in the bar...I like how you did up the hook shit was dope... the second verse.. the mic quality is not good. to close to the mic or somethin.. He got a dope delivery tho... This was a decent track... Pretty good shit. keep it up.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=160798
Get at that when u can.
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