yea tight peice













that gurl hazy really came good huh

wink wink

lmao nah but if we not gonna get good replys then ima give us one

lmao

ill show you all hows its done
first off its like such a shock to me that i got to collab wit teh gurl that hated n wooped my ass for me....( all yall newbies woulndt kno ) but for those who remeber .....yeah how could you forget
anyways enough blabbin

gege 1st verse

My sense of direction, i let you control me..
console me, and hold me, and more so, help
mold me..

wonderful essence of what the man meant to you...the man that bitch hazy stole muahahahahahaah

gege verse 2


and i smelled cheap perfume when he'd creep
in the room..
me asleep, dreamt of gloom..I only wanted to
keep my groom..

that perfume was 96 dollars an ounce biotch ....lol...now but htis added to teh characters showin the tru scheme of what was going on but in a subtle way....like teh wifey knew what was happenin but kept it on teh down low yano?

gege 3rd verse
ever happened between us, we go back too
far..
for some stranger to run up and ruin
everything we are..


damn my fave part of the whole things its like WOW ihazy hit hard and took the man ansd your in teh mood where shock takes over and you realize whats up.....happened to me many a time for sure......

gege FINAL VERSE

you could not have ended it better i dont think you made it all come to a hearfelt end and when you get done reading this of the READER EDOESNT FEEL SORRY FOR YOU......damn they got issues cuz you showin that you strong by moving on but torn apart at what took place
Now '"he's" happy with "her", No longer does
he love me..
but at least when he did, it wasnt for the
money..
Our relationship was real, based on passion
for the doin..
It was "her" who led him out and sent him
packin for the ruin..


AMAZING shit right there......MY HONEST OPINION i have NEVER EVER SEEN A FEMALE WRITE AS WELL AS YOU ....males usualy catch my attention (lol) but females realrey do cuz i write the same stuff as them but you...gege you take this poetry aspect and apply it to your text and it fukkin abducts ppl.....and if the ppl that reply would actually READ TEH DAMN peice theyd realize that this shit happens and that you have a very excellent was of makin it understood over a computer screen......

talent
nonetheless

shaynea terra lee evans