The Ups and Downs of Life
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Voted For: KoObOo
damn, i was kinda expecting more from distilled in this one, pretty one sided battle... I felt kooboo had an excellent flow through out the verse, alot of multies alot of internal multies and it was readable, the way the last line was only a half a bar with no finish kinda sucked but it was the only real weak point in the verse... arms on cocks, car parts punches were real nice, all in all a nice verse.. Distilled I felt ur flow was kinda forced, simple rhyming scheme rhyming only the last word of most of ur bars, punches weren't very intense and to top it all off your verse was alot shorter than your opponents... Good luck in future both, Vote KoObOo.
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