listen up mad dog your audio banjo song clearly sucked
but mad dog you are kinda gettin used to havin audio fucked
/\ An ok opener good flow

I mean your just a plain faggot you think your verses are kool
bitch your rappin like a clown and your middle name is fool
/\ wack...no punch and what kjind of personal was that???

Stupid ass every single word of yours gets me frustrated
It's like your such a bitch you actually like to be hated
/\...no comment

you think you it and I wish you died at birth in ya minites
mad dog is just born retarded but pretends he don't give a shit
/\ again wtf!?!...

mutha fucker whach where ya steppin I shoot ya wid ma weapon
my verse shits on you teachin you dumass a big lesson
/\ blah @ this bar

You an't nothin but it hurts me dat you say dat ur somethin
Okay hear it is your GAY now bitch learn to quit frontin
cause im'a keep sonnin while ur in a van wid dad humpin
/\ 3 line rhyme...blah all lines

Your just twisted you'll never gonna be the one who's gifted
your the type to get punched in ya fat face knock down hitted
/\ senseless rhyme

I'll smack the fuckin shit outat ya till ya fall on right on ya back
fuck you up bitch punch your back till your fuckin vetibrai snaps
/\ blah @ this bar again

every word Im spittin his gettin your stickin ass down n pitted
as soon as you read dis you'll have both wrists on ya slitted
Just go home dog i'm leavin you dead wid your head splitted
/\ blah closer

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1st bar good punch/personal but everything else was wack again...flow and structure again was the only thing going for you...

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