Just listened to it 3 times.
Voice clear, flow is steady...and its ur own style so I like it. U rode the beat well...
Great job Fluid!
I notice U ended the flow at :47 ......seem like u let it drift, but maybe u did it like that purposely.
I think you could have snuck one more bar in there to finish your verse which would have ended at :52. The beat seems as if it was fit to end the verse at :52, and then the hook comes in.
Nevertheless u did ur thang! Im looking forward to hearing more of u. I like listening to u in fact!
Keep it up!
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