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Old 11-20-04, 07:58 AM   #9
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I just don't give a fuck!
 
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Voted For: M-Dog

M-Dog got this...

Blackwell...ya need to elevate...work on ya structure and try to come harder with punches. u sacraficed good strong punches for multies. multies don't win battles. punches and personals do. u'd tried the uk punch but it didn't work coz the flow was off coz it didn't rhyme.

Ite man you beat me before thats "true-ta-say"
Ya gunna get "bruised today"....you need a new way
multies but no punch^

M-Dog...nice verse...structure was neat...punches hit hard and u had some nice personals in here too, the link worked nicely too..lmao at ya second bar..that was a witty punch.

v/ M-Dog for a better structure harder punches and sucssesful punches...and an overall creative and witty verse.