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Old 11-20-04, 10:25 AM   #13
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Voted For: *Troop*

Decent Battle But TheSinnister I wer'ent Feelin Ya...
Troop-Had Good Personal's and Harder Punch's Than TS, the Structure also was more enjoyable to read because it was more compact, The Vocab was good and i think ya best line was the second Line. Overall 8/10

TheSinnister-Ya Verse looked like a pre written one since there was no personal' or hard Punch's, some of your verse was played but it was decent. You need to elevate on Punch's and Vocab Overall 4/10
V/Troop
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