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Old 11-20-04, 10:59 AM   #8
PayDay
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yo man...i was feelin this...tight shit...your first few lines were a lil bit streched, could minimize that a lil bit...the rest of it, flowed well...good vocab, multies...which helped with the flow a whole lot...nice drop fam...8/10...keep them coming
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