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Old 11-20-04, 11:17 AM   #40
Mask Murderous
Straight Hustla.
 
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Voted For: *Troop*



put asteriks on ya name only way u be no.1 rv
see my name an u consumed in greed an ^ look wit no period is what u be
^ THIS WAS A very weak punch
small font fits u all ya lines aint really noticed or read
tryna shine off ya lyrics should just let ya s curl grease do it instead
^ decent but nothing major[b]
reasearch another disease shit wont work this week E endin ya streak
unoriginal every hour theres 3600 of u and u calim a.i.'s elite?
[b]Aight i thought this was good

just try kidnapins its gonna be the only way u ever ran-som people
could own u bilingual puta...
...but slaverys illegal an yet still nobodys around u tryna mingle*
Way to stretched and this punch never connected
life pass before your eyes when ya electricity blacks out
never a ridah just a hitchhika in a bus stop only time u in a glass house*
Nope I Dint understand the 2nd line & If your punches dont make sense to the majority of people, Dont use it

I dint think this verse was all that, infact the weakest i've seen you drop.

Hault to all Cornish Ambitions Testify to your Truths Please Mr E Looch
Ya "Financial Income" comes From Vaginal Devouring it should be E Mooch
This was corny no no no
Technique never Duplicated,Cus Pussified Thread Duckers isnt in Preference
Strobe Pm'd me with Rv's Best of All time Vets And Looch wasent in Reference
THIS is another wack & bad flow line plus it was stretched
Your Dna Cells Recognize your Falseness why is your BloodPressure187
Ya Perpetrateing Respected Veteran U look up 2 me like Ten Viewin Eleven
I liked this punch but it was played to the max and not alot of creativitie
You Never Developed your Cash Collecting Tactics so your still on the Grind
Looch is never Heard Like Mimes No wonder hes a "Legend in his Own Mind"
I liked this good punch
One last Reminder stop with your Recycled Lyrics they are well Past Expirement
This Records as your 3rd Loss so Finally now you can go into Retirement
[b]Nope weak closer[/b[

This was a weak battle but i'm going for troop because he had the only 1 good punch... but his flow as terrible... and structure need's work & stop minimizing your font so you can hide your wack strucutre in the future.
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