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Old 11-20-04, 01:03 PM   #27
Terse.
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Voted For: GKillaz05

ehhh....this was an okay battle...

GKillaz, i thought ya verse was okay...the structure was on point and so was the flow...i didnt see any personals...and the punches were meh...next time, u gotta think of more fresh concepts...good consistency...

Red Beam, ya verse was meh...i didnt really like the structure, but there still was a good flow to it...i didnt see any personals in your verse either...and your punches were meh too...but what brought u down was the inconsistency...a lot of the lines were filler or didnt hit hard....

V/ GKillaz, by a hair.....it was a close one...

i'd appreciate if both/either of u drop an honest vote here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=157669