Voted For: ..:Outbreak:..

This Just another Oppurtunity For Sinner to Be Owned and Clowned-
Thought Xclusive was King of herb's, Obviously he was Overthrown and S was Crowned-
^^eh ok, more humourous then anything..
I Mean Look at this Bitch, begging for help from different Crew's-
His Outlook On Battle's are Prolly You win some you lose some but obviously that don't apply to You!-*
^^decent..stretched a bit
It's Real Out Here...Huh...Kid You've got ya Priority's Mixed Up-
You ain't No Sinner,Ya Rhyme's are "Paw" Like the Andrex Paper Pup-**
^^good........
I'll Snatch the Breath From Ya Chest, and Leave a Standing Carcass
You Coul'dnt feel me if we were playing water Polo, and ya name was Marcus-***
^^lol, k this was decent
Your Open Mic's are Shit Kid Why not just Quit, Decease, Just Stop-
My Line's are Tight...Like Ya little Sister, Until They both Go POP!-****
meh weak closer
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Now shit break has come to give me a little tention
this mutha fucker is so old he forgot he's on a pention
^^ok, not bad but is it a real personal, i dunno..
and not to mention this little faggots a bitch and pedofile
mutha fuckers got health problems and he got the piles
^^no, not even a punch...
look at it's avatar it's a fuckin doll that is spankin
he gets turned on by it cause he's gay and starts jackin
^^bad ryhmin, no decent wit yet??.??
he thinks his rhymes are uneque he can't even speak
went out wid a dog for a week and she just got freaked
^^hell no, this is jus bad...doesnt constitute as a punch
Just read up about how you luv all ya monster munch
your gettin punched silly and you died wid my first punch
^^weak closer..
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k,outbreak..you typed in capital thats the main reason ya shit looked stretched at times, some of ya punches were decent closer was blah< not overly great but you had some wit in ya verse..(marco-polo,line)...decent drop..stay up..
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sinner,..your opener was decent< but it seemed like a fake personal..that aint koo.the rest of youy lines were simple n had no wittyness in them 1 line didnt even ryhme...
you gotta try n get some wordplay n better vocab...your structure was the only real thing you had going for ya....
..outbreak-gets my vote for havin some wittyness in his punches n keepin a decent flow throughout his verse...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!