Voted For: Artik Phrost

Damn... Artik, you've stuffed this battle with wordplay and metaphors... Don't think I didn't catch onto the wordplay either. There's so fucking many I had to re-read them just to catch them. Those that don't take the time to are just fucking dumb. These are worth the time of thinking them through.

I'd just say work on your structure, so that your rhymes would be easier to read...

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