Voted For: 9th Degree

aight philo-started off nice kept to the point, but round the middle end you lines started to fall off a lil n ya story line fell apart not enough emotion n to much raw story....i liked your concept but the ending couldve been written alot better...
take your time with a topical ..think it out backwards<
sometimes it helps...
9th,good flow nice story ya ending was the best part...wordin was good)held it together throughout the verse i like how you had more content in the piece, overall a better drop..
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meh im koo with both"props on ya drops"
at least you kno its honest..

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!