fuck tryna say this is ya first attempt....u shoulda still wanted to work on ya shit so peeps would listen to ya first attempt and be like damn...dont make excuses..u mumbled ya verse...like u aint want ya mother to come in a hear u record then beat ya ass or somethin...put some type of emotion into it man...wassup wit u keep hittin the mic too...the only time u had emotion was when u said..."yea" and dat wasdnt even in the verse....man work on ya shit alot kid...

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