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Old 11-21-04, 03:32 AM   #2
Enygma
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*listening*

I plan to also do this song, so I hope you're good.....lol. Lyrics and flow are cool, but you could really use some emotion and help with the quality. I thought this was supposed to be the political song.....oh wait, this is the learning track isn't it. Umm.....my advice to you is to redo the verse and put some emotion into it, just try spitting a little bit louder....actually a lot louder, then send me your vocals......vocals only, no beat. I'll doctor them up a little for you
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