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Old 11-21-04, 04:53 PM   #12
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Voted For: Chaos

hang-man : skip those numbers at the end, it's annoying...
verses are rather basic, your vocab could've been better. Had some nice punches but none of them really hit hard, you could've used way more personals, that kinda lacked according to me. Flow was ok but it's the punches and personals that win the battle...

Chaos : Auwch, that text color is hurting my eyes...fix that...
Flow was good, had some nice rhymes: not too basic, but not overdone, i like it that way. Punches were good, some of them were a bit played but you had some hardhitters in there. Maybe could've used a more personal touch but overall nice drop.

So my vote goes to Chaos...
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