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Old 11-21-04, 05:53 PM   #6
Ca'lam
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lol......... *listens*


i can tell this isnt ur guys persona of life.. but its a fun song im taking it..


first verse: flow at the beggining was aight... but then it fell off.. lyrics were iight.. keep workin on it tho.. not to bad.. but needs some elevating..


chorus: Wasent as clear as a chorus should be.. but its was strait..

second verse: flow was good.. but wasent sayin shit for real.. to simple.. not much wit.. with a slow flow u gotta be witty..

quality: 2nd verses was decent quality.. first was ass lol..

all in all.. ehh wasent really feelin this track.. to me it was around a 5/10..
but, everyones here to elevate.. word.. -1
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