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Old 11-21-04, 07:09 PM   #21
g-ballz
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Voted For: Ultimatum

Ultimatum: best part of your verse was your complex vocabulary to be honest your best trait. well it was slightly effective. but the downfall was the verse got played most of the time, due to the fact that you used "murdering"/"killing" lines a goddamn lot....overall: 6/10

CeRtIfIeDtHuG: didn't like anything about this verse....
why you ask? for the following reason. 1.) it wasn't effective because you tend to self-glorify yourself a lot in every single bar. original? hell no. this doesn't do it for me. your flow was okay except for the 5th line. overall: 2/10

vote: Ultimatum
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